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moon tanka
by Maureen Glaudethe night's gibbous moon
giving us
a closing moment
three poets
stared upward
12/09/2003 Posted on 12/09/2003
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude
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| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/09/03 at 06:49 PM what kind of moment? what does it make you think? it's a lovely still image talking of a still image.. it needs some observation within the observation |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/09/03 at 07:07 PM Ditto on Bonnie's comment, only by this morning it was full as compared to gibbous. In regards to your tanka, now the question is how does one top perfection...maybe with only more perfection?! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 12/12/03 at 11:31 PM Nothing like the moon to get the poet's juices flowing... and three of them, well, what else could be expected! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/26/04 at 01:46 AM Wonder and awe suggested here! |
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