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(haiku) rainwater,

by Andrew S Adams

a contradiction:
rain is just dirty water.
come now, child. let's bathe.

12/08/2003

Posted on 12/09/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 12/09/03 at 03:31 AM

absolutely stunning, this is a powerful little sucker. :) great job.

Posted by Cole Miller on 12/09/03 at 09:12 PM

beautiful, i love the tone of it.

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