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Frozen Pond (haiku)

by David R Spellman

 
December’s chill wind
icing pond’s glass surface cries
"no swimming" aloud
 
 
 

12/06/2003

Posted on 12/08/2003
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/08/03 at 02:47 AM

Clever play on words in this very chilling haiku! :)

Posted by JD Clay on 12/08/03 at 03:43 AM

Brrrrr! You know when it's a good winter haiku when it makes you shiver. Well done, Pal. Pe4ce...

Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/08/03 at 06:30 AM

...except to the Polar Bear Club, if they dug a hole ;) nice observation

Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/08/03 at 08:45 PM

it really does give one chills! Great read :)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 04:42 AM

The restrictions that the beauty of winter places on us. Beautiful and articulate observation of nature. Great read.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/09/03 at 04:02 PM

I love those unseasonal signs readings. Good capture. Ironic

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/09/03 at 05:08 PM

HA! Excellent. I can just picture it. Well done!!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/12/03 at 04:00 AM

chilly beautiful haiku!

Posted by Kate Demeree on 12/12/03 at 04:25 AM

*smiling*... umm.. a winter scent to warm the heart...

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 12/13/03 at 12:08 AM

The epitomy of a winter deep freeze...

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/15/03 at 03:11 PM

as a lover of haikus, i think this is just wonderfully written...

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/15/03 at 09:47 PM

Love the picture AND the play on words! Great haiku!

Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 12/16/03 at 04:12 AM

clever and wonderful. bravo!

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/18/04 at 02:45 AM

ha! I really like that play on words

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