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cold glass and the air.
by Andrew S Adamsbecause when my lips touch
your lips i dont expect to breathe frozen air,
but that's how it is-
so i suck it up and inhale anyways.
and just because your eyes are made of
lead crystal doesnt make them any more
fragile than any entity you might find
anywhere else in the mind.
and just because your tears are icewater
doesnt mean that i'm thirsty and exhausted. 12/06/2003 Posted on 12/07/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 12/07/03 at 06:13 AM this rocks. i have been sittin back and watching your writing grow and you just keep gettin better and better. i love this. right on. |
| Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 12/07/03 at 09:13 AM Oh this applies to a situation that I just went through. Very lovely Andy;) |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 12/08/03 at 12:01 AM i agree with alaina on the last two lines. just, simply, amazing andrew. |
| Posted by Quinn Vokes on 12/10/03 at 02:21 AM yes, i completely agree on the last two lines. perfect way to end it. kind of a kick in the face, isn't it? lol. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/12/03 at 04:04 AM chillingly brilliant!!!... bitingraw emotion... excellent... blessings... |
| Posted by June Labyzon on 12/03/14 at 10:25 PM Oh my tell it like it is...love this on my favorite list it goes |
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