| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/06/03 at 07:16 PM Beautiful to the eye without reading it! I think reflects the uncertainty of our times from the World's point of view. While Christians have anxiety over events I am sure, their worldview keeps them steady and stable. No panic! Rather trust! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/07/03 at 09:08 PM Truly haunting and even mildly disturbing David. And I like it very much for that fact. A firm reminder in a subtle sense of how many things in life we leave unfinished. Our time here is indeed quite finitem as hourglass depicts. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/08/03 at 12:58 AM a concrete poem that definitely matches it text's flow and message perfectly |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 04:48 AM Tremendous manipulation of time --both in concept and form. The words are masterfully crafted and the last line "the assurance of uncertainty" resonates with the reader long after the poem has been read. Thank you for sharing. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/02/04 at 01:24 PM how very profound... excellent form... flowing style... life is uncertain, but not i over the quality of this poem... incredible... blessings... |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/31/07 at 03:39 PM This is a work of genius; the hourglass shape is perfect. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/31/07 at 06:07 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Dave. The hourglass shape is great along with the poem....Charlie |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 05/31/07 at 07:25 PM Congrats on POTD! This starts out great and ends the same. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/01/07 at 02:19 AM Excellent poem with great images. Time is one of the few things that are certain - because it never stops. Congratulations on POTD.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/01/07 at 02:39 AM Uhhh! The more I read this the more I recognize the relationship between time and space. I like everything about this Poem Of The Day. Congratulations on the clever title too! How apropos. |
