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You're Not Listening

I can hear you smile
Over the phone but you can't
Seem to hear me cry

11/24/2003

Author's Note: 5-7-5

Posted on 11/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 11/26/03 at 03:49 AM

THIS IS AMAZING!!!!

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 11/28/03 at 01:54 AM

what a freaking mirror that telephone is. superbly delicate handling of an intense situation, cole. good work. :)

Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 11/30/03 at 08:38 PM

you have put pain into a haiku beautifully. incredible.

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