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by Andrew S Adams


Author's Note: published in the 2004 issue of edina high school's "images" magazine.

Posted on 11/24/2003
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 11/25/03 at 05:29 AM

this is the most creative thing i have seen in a long time. it's amazing!

Posted by Cole Miller on 11/25/03 at 06:22 PM

youve outdone yourself again andrew, and in such a short piece, way to go.

Posted by Laura Doom on 11/30/03 at 11:24 AM

Poetry with integrity - an attractive and thoughtful creation

Posted by Jason Wardell on 06/01/04 at 06:22 AM

Dang. I'm really enjoying, not only the form of this, but the deeper meaning. As Aiko said, poems with strange structures often have them for nothing other than to obscure the fact that the poem doesn't have anything to say. This poem does have something to say, however, and it is quite profound. Congrats on member spotlight. :)

Posted by J. P. Davies on 06/04/04 at 07:47 PM

Quite Stellar.

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