this is the most creative thing i have seen in a long time. it's amazing!

youve outdone yourself again andrew, and in such a short piece, way to go.

Poetry with integrity - an attractive and thoughtful creation

Dang. I'm really enjoying, not only the form of this, but the deeper meaning. As Aiko said, poems with strange structures often have them for nothing other than to obscure the fact that the poem doesn't have anything to say. This poem does have something to say, however, and it is quite profound. Congrats on member spotlight. :)

Quite Stellar.