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sincerely
by Rachelle Howethere are many things you
may not know about me yet, dear friend,
though i'm always open for revision.
i've found that white-out is
useful in the typos that i've trekked,
and each day a new sentence
is jotted on my feeble skin.
i seldomly ever write with razorblades anymore,
and i find its less painful that way.
what should i say to you now?
vocal chords are always welcome.
i'll pay you back
if you'll leave it on my card.
(just sign me sincerely,
that's all i ask.) 11/23/2003 Author's Note: my brain is so... odd. this literally is a train of thought for me. so you asked for me to let you in, well, here's your door.
Posted on 11/24/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/24/03 at 09:11 PM fantastic line about the razorblades. YES, you can write with POWER, without razorblades. Soft or hard, your words are beautiful |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 11/25/03 at 06:29 AM and each day a new sentence is jotted on my feeble skin... that line is what sticks out the most for me, it shows that life does tell a story, one day at a time. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/25/03 at 04:19 PM Trains of thought... you sound as tangentalized as me. Great to know there are people out there that think differently. It is important IMHO, that people think differntly. Or else nothing new would ever be created. Great read. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/25/03 at 07:12 PM Really enjoyed this. Well expressed, strong message! |
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