| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/24/03 at 01:24 AM wow. BIG letters. i literally went whoa. as for the piece itself, the blue crayon would be a nice touch. ;) but the whole thing ties in together quite well, though i don't understand the cliche part. o.O esplain? |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/24/03 at 04:21 AM Ahhhh, dream a dream of the poet. Dance with quill in hand! A great verse that should bring the poet out in anyone --or call the men with white jackets! :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/25/03 at 02:05 PM Love the offbeat message here; makes for a refreshingly different read. Hardly cliched. :o) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/26/03 at 04:28 AM Funtastic: I enjoyed the read....Charlie |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/28/03 at 03:40 AM Your expression of poetic endeavor hardly cliche! Keen imagination as well as humor. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/20/03 at 06:29 AM congratulations Leslie on your POTD! |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 12/20/03 at 06:40 AM Delightful! A wonderfully playful look at the process. I also like your description of the setting for the birth of this poem - sounds like how I write some of mine! Congrats on POTD! d:-) |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 12/20/03 at 08:48 AM Wait wait.. I've rated this already, and never commented? I'm disapointed in myself, lol.
Anyway.. congratulations on POTD, Leslie:) funny story,.. I was just thinking how cliché my writing seems to be lately as I loaded the site, and then Pathetic.org appears on my screen with the word "cliché?".. haha.. oh well, I love this. lets dance upside down together :) |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/20/03 at 09:37 PM congrats on potd, dah'ling. i'm glad to see your name up there, indeed. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/20/03 at 11:59 PM delightful, from the lackadaisacal font to the message. Write on my friend |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/21/03 at 01:39 AM Congratulations on POTD! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/17/04 at 07:55 PM love it! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/12/04 at 03:53 PM So spirited and alive! |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 11/18/04 at 01:51 AM Things like this pop out of the mind at the most interesting moments. Something in there was being very creative and dreaming that day, for this lovely lil escape from reality. :) |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 12/30/14 at 02:19 PM I love this! Love the story behind it and every beautiful word written! You're awesome! :) |
