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Without Love by Kate DemereeI could touch you Bring the throb of passion To that empty hollow breast I could make love to your body Leave your heart in mothballs pressed Use my body to sate your bodies need Give to you my passion without heart Accept your seed Share with you Hot wild imaginings Doing all of the forbidden things Sing to you a sirens song Burn the fire hot Hard Strong With the rising sun The need would be gone You could then Travel on Without Love 11/19/2003 Author's Note: Sometimes in today's society there is a tendency to go for a no strings relationship. That is something I have never gotten used to, and doubt I ever shall... Truth to tell I don't ever want to.
Posted on 11/19/2003 Copyright © 2025 Kate Demeree
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| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/19/03 at 07:44 PM Your poem rewrites the last word of the line in that song, "It's so easy, it's so easy to fall in love" to "...lust." Those strings... the thread of real love that attach us to our humanity. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/19/03 at 07:54 PM Your words always have such a magical feel to them. Great read. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 11/21/03 at 09:43 PM The feeling of love imparts the real passion and this you say so evocatively well... [;0)~ |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/22/03 at 04:06 AM You picture today's TV image of relationships quite well. Unfortunately it is a reflection of too much of what is going on in our current culture. And we are paying dearly as a society. Striking! |
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