Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/20/03 at 04:29 PM the simplicity and depth to this makes my heart sing, though the remorse is still there, deep. and i love what you've plucked from me, darling, you've kept me a seed. i hope i grow. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/18/03 at 12:42 PM Poignantly expressed, part of the human condition without the grace of God. Only He can soften the memories, take away the bitterness and doubt. |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/18/03 at 01:18 PM congrats on POTD for this! Rich with wisdom and perception. and truth |
Posted by JD Clay on 12/18/03 at 01:50 PM You wonderful Poem Of The Day serves as a wake up call and offers a splendid ray of hope in it's truthfulness. Congratulations, or should I say thank you.
Pe4ce... |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/18/03 at 06:24 PM this is so profound and real... wow, lori, a perfect poem... blessings and congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Mara Meade on 12/18/03 at 09:16 PM -chuckle- Well, mama jo AND you are talkin' to ME! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/18/03 at 10:18 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Lori. I enjoyed reading it.....Charlie |
Posted by Jane E Pearce on 12/19/03 at 10:14 PM Loved thise simple lines that say so much. |