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On Walking Around Downtown

by Shayla R Cakes

The thousands of cars speed past my aching feet
As I meander through the city
Peoplewatching, contemplating
Reflecting on the town I love...
The skyscrapers towering before me
Hundreds of drunken twenty-somethings
Acknowledging the aftermath of their night of fun
Guitar players and drug dealers
Rockstars and good friends
I'll take the bad with the good...
I love my town, and I wouldn't give it up.
I am a part of it,
With my reflection in the puddles
My friends greeting me with a warm smile
A smack on the tuckas,
A hug
And laughter.
I love my town...
The sirens of the police cars
And the request for spare change grows silent
Though they're still there
As I take in my city
As I become one with the thing I love the most
Minneapolis

11/16/2003

Author's Note: "I LOVE THIS TOWN" - Elyse Einziger, 10/15/2003

Posted on 11/16/2003
Copyright © 2024 Shayla R Cakes

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cole Miller on 11/16/03 at 09:51 PM

the city, yes i do love it. i will miss that one thing when i go. but the mountains... the city is nothing compared to the mountains... lovely poem this is...

Posted by Agnes Eva on 11/17/03 at 11:31 PM

great urban musings

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