Take Me With You (Tanka)

by Thomas K. Hunt

To be far away
If only in my minds eye
I am not content
To be left behind alone
Take me with you when you go


Posted on 11/14/2003
Copyright © 2020 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 11/15/03 at 03:09 PM

very cool! I want to fold this up on a piece of paper and carry it around in my pocket :)

Posted by Laura Doom on 11/16/03 at 03:00 PM

Yes, this is flavoured with nostalgia, garnished with future perspective. Moving and well formed.

Posted by Mara Meade on 11/16/03 at 07:56 PM

Yes... I'm with Britt in that this is something you'd want to keep with you in your pocket... I like the concept and admire the way you fit the concept, smoothly, into the form.

Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/16/03 at 10:11 PM

Very nice, Thomas. Beautifully expressed rendered.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/17/03 at 07:18 PM

Thanks for the refresher course in Tanka Tom. You might say now that I'm tanked!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/22/03 at 01:29 AM

Tanka for the education Tom. Well written....Charlie

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