| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 11/15/03 at 03:09 PM very cool! I want to fold this up on a piece of paper and carry it around in my pocket :) |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/16/03 at 03:00 PM Yes, this is flavoured with nostalgia, garnished with future perspective. Moving and well formed. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/16/03 at 07:56 PM Yes... I'm with Britt in that this is something you'd want to keep with you in your pocket... I like the concept and admire the way you fit the concept, smoothly, into the form. |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/16/03 at 10:11 PM Very nice, Thomas. Beautifully expressed rendered. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/17/03 at 07:18 PM Thanks for the refresher course in Tanka Tom. You might say now that I'm tanked! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/22/03 at 01:29 AM Tanka for the education Tom. Well written....Charlie |
