|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 11/15/03 at 03:09 PM|
very cool! I want to fold this up on a piece of paper and carry it around in my pocket :)
|Posted by Laura Doom on 11/16/03 at 03:00 PM|
Yes, this is flavoured with nostalgia, garnished with future perspective. Moving and well formed.
|Posted by Mara Meade on 11/16/03 at 07:56 PM|
Yes... I'm with Britt in that this is something you'd want to keep with you in your pocket... I like the concept and admire the way you fit the concept, smoothly, into the form.
|Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/16/03 at 10:11 PM|
Very nice, Thomas. Beautifully expressed rendered.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/17/03 at 07:18 PM|
Thanks for the refresher course in Tanka Tom. You might say now that I'm tanked!
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/22/03 at 01:29 AM|
Tanka for the education Tom. Well written....Charlie