| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/10/03 at 04:39 PM You should put that to music.... it's stunning in its beauty and so uplifting! Great verse! :) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/10/03 at 09:19 PM this would be a great song!! |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/11/03 at 01:06 AM outstanding fow and yes very lryical...well done |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/11/03 at 01:48 PM oh, to go out and dance under the moon with these beautiful words in my ears would be pure joy!... excellent verse... blessings... |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/12/03 at 12:44 AM There's definitely something about the moon tonight! I'm not accustomed to agreeing with people generally, but I can't avoid it here :>]. A beautifully melodious lunar skyscape... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/13/03 at 07:13 PM Creamy smooth melody and lyrics lends to easy singing this in the mind. Thanks for the moon tan Kim! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 01/19/04 at 08:12 PM Warming, stunning imagery - as many have already said, this would be a beautiful song. You have painted a vivid moving picuture with only a few brush strokes
*rising in silver perfection
casting your sheen of protection*
Awesome! The melody and flow is enhanced by your soft, flowing, and brilliant choice of words |
| Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 04/04/05 at 06:59 PM This poem has a lovely rhythm to it. There is beauty in moongazing, and you captured it! :) |
