| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 11/07/03 at 05:13 PM A great line "A collision with division". The lines flow beautifully and capture the pain well. Great work. |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 11/08/03 at 12:22 AM What a beautifully exquisite image of loss and helplessness. Imagine what this can now invite into your life. I look forward to the next chapter. ;o) ~ S |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/08/03 at 07:10 PM Really interesting way of describing a breakup...collision with division like it suddenly hit you that shes gone. funny how emotions can do that. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/09/03 at 03:47 AM A clever spinning of mathmatics into the emotions of relationship... seemingly opposite realities. You have given heart to a mind-formed discipline. I like the contrast and unexpected parallel. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/10/03 at 03:33 AM I like the way you blend relationships and mathmatics... the way that life blends all things. |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 11/11/03 at 10:01 PM Wow ... be there done that ... *sad* ... great piece! |
