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Crossing The Street (traffic)

by Cole Miller

If I was holding your hand as
we looked both ways before we
crossed the street

You'd still think that I would
Walk you into oncoming


Posted on 11/02/2003
Copyright © 2020 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristine Briese on 11/04/03 at 03:05 AM

Hmmm...leaves the reader wondering about further meaning...tantalizing.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/15/13 at 11:44 AM

there is much stirring, much taking place and trying to take shape here beyond the seeming nihilism and devil may care and it is this and that undefined quality that qualifies the poem for me as meaningful beyond the surreal.

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