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by Jason Wardell

thank you, Pathetic
my writing used to be poor
now it is just vague

11/01/2003

Author's Note: in the spirit of the "thank you" teen poetry contest, i wrote three senryu. i apologize for all of them.

Posted on 11/02/2003
Copyright © 2024 Jason Wardell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 11/03/03 at 05:20 AM

I agree with misti.

Posted by Cole Miller on 11/05/03 at 06:07 AM

something that i too have to thank pathetic for.

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/05/03 at 02:54 PM

*cracking up.* a freaking men to that, baby. ;) you did used to suck. *DUCKS.* JUST KIDDING! hehehehehe. i think i have to definitely concur. about my own. yeah.

Posted by Don Coffman on 11/06/03 at 08:01 AM

What a pathetic poem... ;)

Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/06/03 at 08:16 AM

smiles...you're something else ;)

Posted by Mara Meade on 11/06/03 at 10:17 PM

BWAHHHH HAAHHH HHAAAAAHH! This is gut-busting FUNNY! I love a dry wit!

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 11/07/03 at 01:43 AM

No you're not. You're good. Vague implies that you're neither here nor there, and you're definitely one or the other (depending on where the judge happens to be sitting).

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/10/03 at 06:11 AM

lol... well, here's one poem that isn't poor, nor vague.. ::grin::... blessings

Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/02/03 at 08:05 AM

you clever chap! so funny to see poor and vague as some kinda intended opposites- fabulous!

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/08/04 at 03:49 AM

hahaha, how true that is! not for you i mean...ah for me... shoot... i'm complimenting you i swear!

Posted by Michelle Floyd on 01/31/05 at 07:03 AM

Heh. This made me smirk.

Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/07 at 01:48 AM

Oh sweet poet, *laughing* you may think your writing vague... I think it vogue! May your drogue doggerel be a forever pathetic pennant! Love it.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 10:07 PM

...wiley, i missed this one, it's a keeper...more than cute, really it is heavy duty.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/19/09 at 10:39 AM

Fun read- says so much in an economy of words. You certainly made your point!

Posted by Richard Vince on 06/04/16 at 09:10 PM

wow. this is just perfect. my writing went through the same metamorphosis in the first few years after i joined Pathetic. :) a very deserving POTD.

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