Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 11/03/03 at 05:20 AM I agree with misti. |
Posted by Cole Miller on 11/05/03 at 06:07 AM something that i too have to thank pathetic for. |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/05/03 at 02:54 PM *cracking up.* a freaking men to that, baby. ;) you did used to suck. *DUCKS.* JUST KIDDING! hehehehehe. i think i have to definitely concur. about my own. yeah. |
Posted by Don Coffman on 11/06/03 at 08:01 AM What a pathetic poem... ;) |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/06/03 at 08:16 AM smiles...you're something else ;) |
Posted by Mara Meade on 11/06/03 at 10:17 PM BWAHHHH HAAHHH HHAAAAAHH! This is gut-busting FUNNY! I love a dry wit! |
Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 11/07/03 at 01:43 AM No you're not. You're good. Vague implies that you're neither here nor there, and you're definitely one or the other (depending on where the judge happens to be sitting). |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/10/03 at 06:11 AM lol... well, here's one poem that isn't poor, nor vague.. ::grin::... blessings |
Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/02/03 at 08:05 AM you clever chap! so funny to see poor and vague as some kinda intended opposites- fabulous! |
Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/08/04 at 03:49 AM hahaha, how true that is! not for you i mean...ah for me... shoot... i'm complimenting you i swear! |
Posted by Michelle Floyd on 01/31/05 at 07:03 AM Heh. This made me smirk. |
Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/07 at 01:48 AM Oh sweet poet, *laughing* you may think your writing vague... I think it vogue! May your drogue doggerel be a forever pathetic pennant! Love it. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 10:07 PM ...wiley, i missed this one, it's a keeper...more than cute, really it is heavy duty. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/19/09 at 10:39 AM Fun read- says so much in an economy of words. You certainly made your point! |
Posted by Richard Vince on 06/04/16 at 09:10 PM wow. this is just perfect. my writing went through the same metamorphosis in the first few years after i joined Pathetic. :) a very deserving POTD. |