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The Kill
by Kimberly Barepure-white swan
glittering upon irredescent waters
floats lazily as
hazy twilight
drops in and
languid violet settles
silver-moonlight-stream
drifts through the
swaying branches to create
an ebb and flow of shadow
a cresendo of crickets
keep tempo to the soothing
melody of katydids
sanctuary
broken
as crimson-tipped
dragon wings
blot out serenity
stricken
one sanguine feather
floats away 10/30/2003
Author's Note: ...i dunno where it came from...but i think i like it...
Posted on 10/30/2003
Copyright © 2024 Kimberly Bare
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 10/30/03 at 04:32 PM I like it too! Beautifully descriptive. :)
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| Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/31/03 at 08:06 PM The imagery in this piece is natural and vivid in a very earthy sense! It imprints images into the mind that brings one closer to the scene. Great word choice and the flow feels like waves or ripples on water. Exquisite crafting! |
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