| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/28/03 at 07:15 PM wow...those last two lines blew me away! Great writing hon :) |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/29/03 at 04:32 PM Ummm.. I love the season and holiday... this poem is phenominal Mo... those last two lines are so very true aren't they...? I love the contrasts in how we view ourselves and how others see us and you write this so very well. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 10/29/03 at 11:14 PM heehee. delightful mistaken identity halloween story with a happy ending |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/31/03 at 07:22 PM A vivid depiction throughout, neatly wrapped up in the ending verses. Wonderful! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/02/03 at 11:13 PM i love this... from the story to the imagery... blessings... |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 11/03/03 at 02:04 AM Well-done and whimsically romantic! d:-) |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/04/03 at 03:03 AM ooh, this is so cute and sweet and horribley clever! |