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Another Day (Haiku)

by Thomas K. Hunt

Wake the helpless dawn
Daylight spoils the darkness
Life goes on again

10/27/2003

Author's Note: Count them, Em

Posted on 10/27/2003
Copyright © 2020 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/27/03 at 01:35 PM

yes, the circle of darkness to light is inevitable. Fine work.

Posted by Emily Sullivan on 10/28/03 at 01:22 AM

5, 7, 5 dad not 5, 8, 5 hehehe i like it though

Posted by Emily Sullivan on 10/28/03 at 07:34 PM

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/29/03 at 03:16 AM

'wake', well, thats the term. The darkness is the absence of the light. Awakening brings the light. Subtle.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/04 at 04:24 AM

Profound observation!

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