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Another Day (Haiku)
by Thomas K. HuntWake the helpless dawn
Daylight spoils the darkness
Life goes on again 10/27/2003
Author's Note: Count them, Em
Posted on 10/27/2003
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/27/03 at 01:35 PM yes, the circle of darkness to light is inevitable. Fine work. |
| Posted by Emily Sullivan on 10/28/03 at 01:22 AM 5, 7, 5 dad
not 5, 8, 5
hehehe
i like it though |
| Posted by Emily Sullivan on 10/28/03 at 07:34 PM nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/29/03 at 03:16 AM 'wake', well, thats the term. The darkness is the absence of the light. Awakening brings the light. Subtle. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/04 at 04:24 AM Profound observation! |
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