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Rennovation of a Remodel

by Lacy D Phillips

She lay in ruins,

structurally unsound.

The jungle encroaches

on all sides now.

She put a hand to her hip--

Chartres' flying buttresses--

and pursed her stained glass lips.

The bend in her knees,

blended of tension and fatigue,

form a peculiar ogee.

She was starving for light.

You could tell by how her breath

froze beneath the lintel of her lips,

She was much larger

than the life she borrowed

from the cosmic debt of time and space.

She was much more shallow

than the deep well of her eyes.

She had translucent beauty,

facade of marble white

clad on structural steel.

Skin on bone.

She

was

your

home.

10/22/2003

Author's Note: The picture pic on top is an example of an ogee arch, for the uninitiated. Down on the bottom is an illustration of a flying buttress. This is a re-write of a re-write of a revamp of "Emotional Architect" which I though was pretty clever when I wrote it, except that it was actually a big piece of crap. I put back in most of the architectural references, but took out the BS about Wren. I've just got the one little Chartres reference in there. This is more characteristic of what I'd write if I weren't being assailed by other people's verse as I write. And I happen to think it's better for it. Lemme know what you think.

Posted on 10/23/2003
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