| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/12/03 at 06:54 PM Good to see that ur muse is up and running again and may it continue to create such soulquakingly vibrating poems. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/12/03 at 07:33 PM I too am glad to see you posting again... I love the final verse! |
| Posted by Jack Lanier on 10/13/03 at 03:50 PM Your true feelings expressed in this one, Anne. You and your works are beautiful!!...:) Jack |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 10/13/03 at 04:54 PM Oh yes... the desire, the anticipation... I like the final verse because it lends itself to interpretation - I can go several ways with it. And btw, welcome home again, dear one! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/13/03 at 05:24 PM The quality and the intensity of association is capable of producing an impression capable of producing the vibrations this beautiful minimal of yours is transmitting. The 'charge' is definately positive and so full of life. So much that the senses refuse to budge compelling time to almost a stop. 'yet Reality's waiting'. 'The final thrill' is still afar. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/13/03 at 07:29 PM Nice one Anne! |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 10/14/03 at 02:37 AM this one sweetie stands out as one of my favorites...well done!!..MUAHS!! |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/15/03 at 04:04 PM you're giving us all goosebumps, Anne. great anticipation and tactile suspense. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/15/03 at 07:30 PM Gorgeous words that very much match the feeling they convey; the hammer's going to fall at the end. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/16/03 at 05:12 PM Good poem Anne.....Charlie |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 10/26/03 at 05:50 AM Your work continues to amaze and delight me. Such excellent work, Anne. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/28/03 at 12:25 PM short but not stunted, insightful and bittersweet. |
