|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/09/03 at 08:11 PM|
this is a fantastically fractured fairy tale Max ... hehe! ... great image!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/09/03 at 09:48 PM|
Hahaha! What a wonderfully warped sense of humor!
|Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/10/03 at 07:41 AM|
this is absolutely freaking hilarious. well done, max, once again!
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/10/03 at 02:26 PM|
lolololol.... and i thought my fairy tales were wacked! SUPERB!!!!!!!
|Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/10/03 at 06:52 PM|
love it...i thoroughly enjoyed reading this...
|Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/12/03 at 07:16 PM|
I read the first stanza and said "hey wait" and read again..yes between the lines.hehe tongue in cheek and witty.U gave me a good laugh and this is really smart.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 10/12/03 at 09:17 PM|
This is definitely a good one. A rather simple story on the surface but reminding of human nature and entropy; all those fairytale stories are doomed to hit some kind of snag along the way.
|Posted by JD Clay on 10/14/03 at 02:11 AM|
If she's anything like my Cinderella, she'll be livin' in his castle and ridin' in his coach. This makes me wonder about those stomach aches I've been havin'. Good stuff, Max.
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/14/03 at 03:12 AM|
From plucked to plush... what a gritty story you tell her. Enjoyed this one, Max.