| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/09/03 at 08:11 PM this is a fantastically fractured fairy tale Max ... hehe! ... great image! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/09/03 at 09:48 PM Hahaha! What a wonderfully warped sense of humor! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/10/03 at 07:41 AM this is absolutely freaking hilarious. well done, max, once again! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/10/03 at 02:26 PM lolololol.... and i thought my fairy tales were wacked! SUPERB!!!!!!! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/10/03 at 06:52 PM love it...i thoroughly enjoyed reading this... |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/12/03 at 07:16 PM I read the first stanza and said "hey wait" and read again..yes between the lines.hehe tongue in cheek and witty.U gave me a good laugh and this is really smart. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/12/03 at 09:17 PM This is definitely a good one. A rather simple story on the surface but reminding of human nature and entropy; all those fairytale stories are doomed to hit some kind of snag along the way. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/14/03 at 02:11 AM If she's anything like my Cinderella, she'll be livin' in his castle and ridin' in his coach. This makes me wonder about those stomach aches I've been havin'. Good stuff, Max.
Peace... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/14/03 at 03:12 AM From plucked to plush... what a gritty story you tell her. Enjoyed this one, Max. |
