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vanilla heaven

spoon cold gelato
warm indian summer sun
cream slips down my throat

10/08/2003

Posted on 10/08/2003
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Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by David R Spellman on 12/18/03 at 02:16 AM

Nice interplay with the gelato and the warmth of the season allowing for the smooooothness of ingestion. Well done!

Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/09/06 at 01:35 PM

This is a delicious little haiku!

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