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by Max Bouillet

“For the first order of business,
I would like to take this opportunity
to publicly thank the following
corporations for helping this
administration’s dream of true equality…

Biohack –for their work on correcting
inequality between the sexes.

Pigmentation Inc. –for their efforts on
eradicating racism.

Mind Tweak International –for their
brainwashing of the masses to eliminate
religious and nationalistic differences.

Thanks to the contributions of these
fine corporate entities,
I can now report with confidence
that everyone on earth has been changed into
bright purple
Godless hermaphrodites.

(applause)

Now for the second order of business,
arson swept through another township last night…
Two suspected left handed people
were observed fleeing the scene.
This administration can no longer tolerate
the flagrant disregard of life exhibited
by these left handed terrorists…”

(applause stops)

10/03/2003

Author's Note: I don't think this is a poem. I don't know what it is.

Posted on 10/03/2003
Copyright © 2024 Max Bouillet

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/03/03 at 04:45 PM

Great sarcastic tone! The beginning makes me thing of 1984 or Harrison Burgeron!

Posted by Sarah Brookes on 10/03/03 at 06:22 PM

It's sharp and cynical, that's what it is :D

Posted by Alex Smyth on 10/04/03 at 02:37 AM

You know the old story~"when they came to take ME away, there was noone left to fight...."

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/04/03 at 09:33 PM

can i have your autograph? this is the most insanely brilliant thing i've ever read.

Posted by Don Coffman on 10/05/03 at 07:51 AM

Whether you decide to call it a poem or not, it's amazing social commentary. Perhaps, slowly but surely, that's the future of (forced) human evolution.

Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/05/03 at 10:45 PM

Oh, wow. Sharp and persistent, a brilliant piece of work.

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/07/03 at 03:40 AM

it's brilliant..that's what it is...

Posted by Mara Meade on 10/07/03 at 09:28 PM

Slice and dice 'em, Max. How exceptionally hypocritical and narrow-minded and blind we all are! Mercy, you just cut to the bone.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/08/03 at 11:16 AM

mindless politics plus mindless voters equals a mindlessness of two and now that those who would be groped got their Arnold, the triumverate of mindlessness is complete. Out of your pen's furnace comes this irony.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/30/03 at 01:35 PM

this is a great big slap in the face to wake people up!... awesome, max, just awesome... ironic and full of life, this poem rocks... blessings

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/24/03 at 11:03 PM

Lefties are not right. ~(8^D)=( fun whatever Max Charlie

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