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cutting out the stars from the top floor of a garage.

by Andrew S Adams

parking garage, the car is running.
inhaling the fumes, i think about it.
i mean, there's a sign saying 'shut up and drive',
i think that they misspelled 'die.'
but it's a silent day, the lot is
eerie, the top level is chilled with a wind.
the day blends to night, the fumes still rise
and i'm still sitting here,
in this garage- the car is running.

tonight is toxic,
tonight, i'll cut the stars out of the sky.
they were written there for you,
but i've erased them for myself.
tonight, i'll cut out the sky-
for you. make you satisfied,
you always needed more.
but where you're empty,
i will shine;

and this car, with the cutesy bumper sticker
it drives away- but i've cut out on that, too.
in the distance, in a forest fire of red tail light,
i can see the words,
shut up and drive

and i guess it was you.

10/02/2003

Posted on 10/02/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Scott Cadence on 10/04/03 at 12:45 AM

Confident with great flow, enjoyed it. I felt like I was there. :)

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 10/04/03 at 09:49 PM

This is intriguing...I just love the title

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/06/03 at 11:08 PM

Andrew this was like slamming on brakes! Glad to have found your library, think i'll take a look around. Nice job on this.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/26/08 at 08:10 PM

the title really sets this poem up

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