| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 09/29/03 at 05:02 AM Very strong images -- they cut to the core |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 09/30/03 at 01:32 PM this poem is awesome!!!... what a slap of reality to our fairy-tale ridden dreams... excellent imagery and great form... blessings :) |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/30/03 at 02:52 PM ...you literally made my jaw drop. if you want my firstborn, you can have it. you're my new satan. i love you. *DIES LAUGHING.* |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/30/03 at 04:05 PM 'this perfect, fairy-tale life' but always pregnant with hopes.Alluring and repeating. Even when its hopeless. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/30/03 at 09:24 PM Tremendous imagery! I love the way this fairy tale gets fractured... great read that truly says a mouthful. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/03/03 at 01:18 PM LOL! My kinda Cinderella. Humorous but also sad reflection on morality. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/07/03 at 09:22 PM clever, clever, and clever....well done! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/17/03 at 03:50 PM This is true creativity. And more realistic than the original. Amazing piece of work, this. |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/22/04 at 06:41 PM Brilliance. If Quentin Tarentino wrote poetry this would be it... |
