stormy visions by Kimberly Baresilence is simmering
in a stone cold
storm cloud
flashes of lightening
reflected in a melancholy gaze
these are turbulent times
and i find myself hushed
unable to voice my vision
peace is a notion which lies easy
on the tongue yet heavy on the heart
nothing is without cost
winds are etching the
promise of change
for change is the only promise
remaining in the wake of the storm
09/17/2003 Posted on 09/17/2003 Copyright © 2025 Kimberly Bare
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Posted by Lori Johnson on 09/17/03 at 08:58 PM "peace is a notion which lies easy
on the tongue yet heavy on the heart" much truth is that verse. Well done, I love the ones that have me walk away thinking. Good stuff. :)
(Welcome to PPS by the way) :)
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Posted by David R Spellman on 09/18/03 at 10:30 PM Gives the impression of important things coming, changes which may overwhelm us in the power of the storm. Well expressed and thought provoking. |
Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/15/03 at 01:21 PM great images for familiar feelings. congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/15/03 at 08:36 PM Congratulations on POTD! |
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