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New Jersey Queen
by Rachelle Howei can nearly hear her voice.
sweet saccharine, those preservatives
doing their job far too well.
we dance around our flirtatious nature,
and i'm giving while she takes.
the story book has ended,
but the title page is still freshly typed.
and i wonder what it would be like
for me to try again, one more time,
wonder what could come of this
while she sits in New Jersey
barely knowing my name. 09/15/2003 Posted on 09/16/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/16/03 at 01:02 AM keep drinking dear...it obviously inspires greatness...i love this...especially the first two lines... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/16/03 at 10:04 PM Gorgeous encounter... sweet and tantalizing --just like this verse. Great read. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/17/03 at 12:39 AM Oh, so subtle, so touching. Lovely. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/14/03 at 06:44 AM Whee! Congrats on the PotD! It's an exquisite poem, full of longing. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/14/03 at 01:54 PM Sweet jersey worthy! This is an excellent pick for POTD, Congrats and good job! |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 10/14/03 at 03:39 PM Congrats, you deserve the recognition. :)
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| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/14/03 at 04:04 PM *applauding* Congratulations! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 10/15/03 at 03:21 AM beautiful job, nice flow and ending =) |
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