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by Amber B

Little white lights of rage
pounding of the fists
beating down
down
down
so far down

Integrity is a word
lost amongst the dirty piles of clothes
no longer washed
no longer worn
living
dying
somewhere
anywhere
please God
not here!

09/06/2003

Posted on 09/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Amber B

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/07/03 at 06:13 PM

Little white lights of rage.... awesome visual that really speaks to me. Great read with lots of emotion.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/10/03 at 05:02 PM

The uncontrollable charge of the compressed refined energies with a negative charge. Not here. Let me add, not any where. Simple but so powerful, this piece.

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