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Raised Dots

maybe if i wrote
in braille you could read me for
you've clearly gone blind

09/04/2003

Author's Note: 5-7-5

Posted on 09/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Kimberly Bare on 09/04/03 at 08:39 PM

Great Haiku! I've felt that way many a time...

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 09/08/03 at 09:09 PM

as blunt as it gets, without being rude, this is classic! Great work!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/09/03 at 03:24 AM

The satire is subtle but profound. Nice piece.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/22/06 at 02:45 PM

This is terrific!

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