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Sunset Pass
by Brian FrancisIn evenings early twilight,
when colors dance above;
lovers hold to each other
a romantic embrace of love
From the edges of the canyon
over-looking the valley floor,
couples share, impassioned there,
the threshold of midnight’s door.
As the last few rays of sunlight
ease slowly up the canyon wall
hearts join together in rhythm,
beating as one, in loves enthrall
09/04/2003 Posted on 09/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/06/03 at 02:11 PM You have captured the SCENE beautifully. The simile too. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/07/03 at 03:28 AM Beautifly depicted.... what a glorious sunset..... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/07/03 at 06:20 PM Passionate and natural images that weave together flawlessly. Great read. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/19/16 at 04:27 PM This is a pleasure to read. Using the canyon as jumping off point ;)for this poem works so well. Congrats on POTD! |
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