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Doldrums by Bruce W NiedtYour day, a gray-flat stratus of a sky,
runs on humidity and sogs the mind
with melted ice cream, watermelon rind,
as uninspired summer hobbles by.
The afternoon will settle, like a fly
on honey, six legs stuck in disrepair.
Though thunderstorming evenings clear the air,
ennui is moderate, not hot and dry.
The day collects with dew upon a glass,
and tracks in rivulets to tables top,
but lifes not uneventful as it seems.
Though clouds will rumble on as hours pass,
its manufacture never deigns to stop;
the day becomes the engine of our dreams. 09/04/2003 Author's Note: Honorable Mention, Rhyming Poetry category, Writer's Digest 2004 Annual Writing Competition, first published in The Lyric, 2010.
Posted on 09/04/2003 Copyright © 2025 Bruce W Niedt
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/04/03 at 04:22 PM Refreshing departure for you and us Bruce. Well timed, as I'm going through doldrums right now as far as writing new material is concerned. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/08/03 at 08:12 PM Splendid natural imagery that really forms pictures in the mind. Very well crafted. |
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