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Orbiting Bodies
by D. Xavier BariWouldn't it be nice
for anybody to notice me?
But wait, today
there's a body
that's better than nobody
who needs a warm body, too.
Hey everybody!
I have somebody!
Look, here's proof!
A name!
A picture!
A cute story!
PROOF!
Maybe this means
I'm somebody, too. 08/31/2003 Posted on 08/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 D. Xavier Bari
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 09/01/03 at 01:00 AM So many ways this could be interpreted. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/03/03 at 03:38 AM Hey everybody!
I have somebody!
Look, here's proof!
reminds me of high school....
funny, yet deep, too. enjoyable read. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/03/03 at 06:36 PM Brilliant statement on those that have no identity and define themselves by whom they are with. Great poem with profound resonances. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 09/05/03 at 02:11 AM arent those kind of relationships symbiotic anyways? (did I spell that right?) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/17/03 at 03:09 AM fantastic title. the irony underneath pulled me to the final conclusion... how we need others and how that need sometimes defies our authenticity. Well done. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 09/23/03 at 02:31 AM simply wonderful, dear... |
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