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#1 (The Zen of Black and White)

by David Neubauer

Sadness welling up
I have no more will to live
All Oreos gone

08/22/2003

Author's Note: I had my fun :-D

Posted on 08/24/2003
Copyright © 2024 David Neubauer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/24/03 at 03:54 AM

The Haiku cause of depression?

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/25/03 at 04:55 PM

Witty piece to tease one's poetic sweet tooth.

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/28/03 at 07:09 AM

A most terrible thing to be out of that divine treat. And a very clever way of writing about it. :)

Posted by Chris D Lavigne on 03/19/04 at 11:35 PM

Is this from the perspective of yourself or a glass of milk?

Posted by A. Paige White on 10/26/06 at 05:49 PM

This is wonderful, the way it drew comments to add dimension to it... and chuckles that might have previously licked plastic....;D

Posted by A. Paige White on 10/27/06 at 04:11 AM

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Posted by Peter Marinelli on 05/10/11 at 10:38 PM

From my perspective, haiku in the everyday of things is Zen unadorned. Unvarnished beauty! I love it!!

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