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#1 (The Zen of Black and White)
by David NeubauerSadness welling up
I have no more will to live
All Oreos gone 08/22/2003 Author's Note: I had my fun :-D
Posted on 08/24/2003
Copyright © 2026 David Neubauer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 08/24/03 at 03:54 AM The Haiku cause of depression? |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/25/03 at 04:55 PM Witty piece to tease one's poetic sweet tooth. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/28/03 at 07:09 AM A most terrible thing to be out of that divine treat. And a very clever way of writing about it. :) |
| Posted by Chris D Lavigne on 03/19/04 at 11:35 PM Is this from the perspective of yourself or a glass of milk? |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/26/06 at 05:49 PM This is wonderful, the way it drew comments to add dimension to it... and chuckles that might have previously licked plastic....;D |
Posted by A. Paige White on 10/27/06 at 04:11 AM
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