| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/20/03 at 09:58 PM Oh, God. Chilling and vital and stunning. Outstanding work. |
| Posted by Barbara Griffith on 08/21/03 at 12:07 AM This is amazing.. it tells you, simply, the bare truth. |
| Posted by Christopher Shin on 08/21/03 at 04:12 PM We all die a little each day. We just go one because well there isn't really much we can do but go on. Loved the poem. Keep on writing |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/22/03 at 01:18 PM I agree w/everyone else's comments.. this is a provoking piece. You have caught our attention! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/23/03 at 03:35 AM Awesome concept and great writing! I can see why this is one of your favorites. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:51 AM Fascinating personal expression; dark but not brooding, interesting to read. |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 09/10/03 at 08:08 PM you've struck a chord deep within me...i understand... |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/29/08 at 12:33 PM I echo what everyone else says. It's like a loss of innocence. Great write. Congrats on POTD! |
