| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/20/03 at 10:02 PM Lovely images; flawless rhythm. |
| Posted by Christopher Shin on 08/21/03 at 03:55 PM Be true to yourself. I for one am not an expert of the heart, but I remember putting to much trust in the heart. It only leads to chaos and sadness. Heal yourself do not let others do it for you. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/21/03 at 08:00 PM wonderful...just don't lose yourself! Nice read:) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/22/03 at 01:17 PM Wonderful flow and feeling.. good work! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/24/03 at 02:20 AM Perfectly orchestrated, like a minuet set to verse. Good stuff, Melinda.
Peace... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:46 AM Good love can certainly do wonderful things for us. Very lovely poem. :) |
