|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/20/03 at 10:02 PM|
Lovely images; flawless rhythm.
|Posted by Christopher Shin on 08/21/03 at 03:55 PM|
Be true to yourself. I for one am not an expert of the heart, but I remember putting to much trust in the heart. It only leads to chaos and sadness. Heal yourself do not let others do it for you.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/21/03 at 08:00 PM|
wonderful...just don't lose yourself! Nice read:)
|Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/22/03 at 01:17 PM|
Wonderful flow and feeling.. good work!
|Posted by JD Clay on 08/24/03 at 02:20 AM|
Perfectly orchestrated, like a minuet set to verse. Good stuff, Melinda.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:46 AM|
Good love can certainly do wonderful things for us. Very lovely poem. :)