by Melinda Sordino

a ballerina on the stage

trapped inside a golden cage

you are the one to hold the key

and only you may set me free

you mend my weak and broken wings

with love and words that angels sing

and aided by your undying love

i can fly high above



Posted on 08/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melinda Sordino

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/20/03 at 10:02 PM

Lovely images; flawless rhythm.

Posted by Christopher Shin on 08/21/03 at 03:55 PM

Be true to yourself. I for one am not an expert of the heart, but I remember putting to much trust in the heart. It only leads to chaos and sadness. Heal yourself do not let others do it for you.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/21/03 at 08:00 PM

wonderful...just don't lose yourself! Nice read:)

Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/22/03 at 01:17 PM

Wonderful flow and feeling.. good work!

Posted by JD Clay on 08/24/03 at 02:20 AM

Perfectly orchestrated, like a minuet set to verse. Good stuff, Melinda. Peace...

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:46 AM

Good love can certainly do wonderful things for us. Very lovely poem. :)

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