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haiku 290

by JD Clay

 

 

 

beneath the dogwood

spring blossoms from every branch

- ten thousand new moons

 

 

 

~ jadi ~

02/05/2002

Posted on 08/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/20/03 at 12:10 PM

breath taking imagery conveyed in so few words...Ahhh...i can feel that spring moonlight breeze...

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 08/20/03 at 04:18 PM

Really fine haiku, jadi! d:-)

Posted by David R Spellman on 08/21/03 at 12:33 PM

Expertly crafted haiku, JD - an immediate and beautiful image presented here.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/22/03 at 12:49 AM

Ahhh my mentor writing haiku. Wonderful new one!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/22/03 at 08:08 PM

Nice images. The moons and the flowers... the reflection of the universe in earthbound nature. Very well crafted.

Posted by Brian Francis on 08/24/03 at 12:42 PM

Nice Haiku. I love the image you create. -bf

Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/25/03 at 03:42 AM

Hi JD, Haiku 290, It's lovely and so peaceful. Good one JD. Jean

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/11/04 at 12:17 PM

I have seen those countless new moons and they were all compassing true north, true south, true every which way and brilling with the poet's compassion for such things that sway with subtleness of spirit.

Posted by Ann Krischus on 06/26/04 at 03:10 PM

beautiful!

Posted by Sam Roberts on 10/25/04 at 02:34 AM

awww, these haiku's are sooo good! I am jealous haha. Enjoying reading through them all, this one is beautiful x

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:15 PM

the promise of love is always magnified... indeed..

Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/17/07 at 03:44 PM

Oh, breathless me! to behold such a flowerscape! I close my eyes - envision the wonder in nightlight. To fill my eyes with tenthousand moons magics me into the divine of spring in this my autumn. Thank you poem for finding me (again) on this day so special to me ...hugs*m.a

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/04/08 at 04:27 AM

This haiku has wonderful texture. I am still in ahhhhhhhhh.....

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