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Echos (Same Moon)

by Cole Miller

how far does my echo travel
when i scream into the night?
can my cries be heard by you
while you sit in your window
and look at the same full moon?
you never thought about that,
no matter how far away we are
we will always be looking up
and crying to the same moon.
can you hear my cries in yours
as we share the moon and night
So again i ask this question
how far does my echo travel
when i scream into the night?


Posted on 08/13/2003
Copyright © 2020 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/14/03 at 06:22 PM

Great read and a timeless question. Thanks for sharing.

Posted by Amanda L Marron on 08/15/03 at 10:29 AM

absolutely beautiful

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 08/17/03 at 06:13 AM

wow, breathtakingly amazing. i have found myself thinking these very thoughts lately, mainly about connectedness with the moon. this is a beautiful, chilling verse that contains so much packed into so little. one of my favorites of yours. peace :a

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