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catatonic state
by Michele Schottelkorbscreaming with rage
inside of her head
its days like today
she feels like shes dead
clouded brain muddled
twisted thoughts emerge
catatonic state
she hasnt a surge
they tell her shes right
when there is no fault here
words of her lover
fall on a deaf ear
daily changes
confuse her mind
suffocated she feels
cant get out of this bind
innocence lost
replaced by fear
all summed up
into one tiny tear
finished 7-30-2003 07/31/2003 Author's Note: bleh... my poems have been ohwoeisme as of late... but, it's been one of those months... ah, a new month tomorrow...
Posted on 07/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/01/03 at 11:13 AM MIchele, I just love the way you flow this great big ocean of a poem and culminate it into a teardrop. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/25/03 at 04:19 PM Some of the most powerful poetry ever has come from the "ohwoeisme" feelings. Great outcry that echoes within the reader's soul. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/30/03 at 06:36 AM Wonderful flow in this, it's almost got a beat to it, and plenty of interesting phrases. 'woeisme' can make for some excellent creativity. |
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