| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/31/03 at 10:27 PM Absolutely brilliant...and so true. Excellent analogy! |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/01/03 at 11:48 AM Hey Max - it's good to see your clever definitions receive the acclaimation they deserve...!well done!...it's a clever concept this dictionary of yours |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/01/03 at 01:04 PM The image presented by this piece is so powerfully evocative; a testament to the unfinished business of time. Excellent description. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/01/03 at 07:19 PM Max, I couldn't help but laugh when I read this. THIS is true procrastination... I mean, there ain't no more time to do anything about it! There's not even an ending to the ending...! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/02/03 at 12:40 AM A unique and emphatic definition of procrastination. Congratulations on being #1 for Best Overall! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/03/03 at 05:17 AM Hi Max,
Good one, Don't why but I guess we all put off things that need done. At least once in awhile. We shouldn't so much, it happens. Peace & Joy, Jean. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/03/03 at 05:17 AM Don't know why. I left out a word. Oooops. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/10/03 at 06:41 AM Now that is true procrastination to the nth degree.....Charlie (good one) |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/24/03 at 07:36 AM Truth is... this definition. A very well chosen example. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/24/03 at 08:52 AM that is so sad... i like this experimental folder... i shall read the rest next time i visit... you write very well... blessings... |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 10/10/03 at 10:28 PM Increadible way to use images to drive home a point. Procrastination is neglecting something or someone. |
