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Taken By Man
by Kate Demeree
You were so easy to love
Was it with the first breath
That I became yours
or ....
Was I created with your name
On my lips
Your essence embedding my soul
It was more than a rib,
God created me with
That marked me
Taken by man 07/29/2003 Posted on 07/29/2003
Copyright © 2025 Kate Demeree
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/29/03 at 05:54 PM Kate your works become subtler, more sublime with each quillstroke. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 07/30/03 at 01:15 PM Marvelous! Simply marvelous! [;0)~ |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/30/03 at 01:43 PM the last lines are simply superbly stunning...kudos, Kate! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/30/03 at 06:56 PM Beautifully crafted. You certainly have a way with words. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/31/03 at 04:01 AM I really liked this one Kate.....Charlie |
| Posted by Jack Lanier on 07/31/03 at 03:53 PM Much said in this one, Kate. Great read...Jack:) |
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