| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/26/03 at 04:41 AM steamy!! enjoyable read :) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/26/03 at 01:49 PM Prodigal poetry, Max. You've out done your molten self, to the point of subterraneal bliss. I'm jealous.
Peace... |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/26/03 at 11:22 PM Yes I agree with Anne ... very steamy!! ;-) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/28/03 at 06:38 PM Hot stuff Max....Charlie |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/28/03 at 10:23 PM chilling. positively. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/29/03 at 02:51 PM LOL! I recall years of marriage like that! Romantic and sensual. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/02/03 at 04:07 AM interesting... kind of brings the lovers play into a universal space at the end when it drips down below (if you've ever wondered how many creatures on this planet may be making love just when you are). it also reminds me of a candle.. the melting kiss of fire on the wick (or one of those 'entwined lovers' candles, perhaps, heheh, a dollhouse full of them) |
| Posted by Patricia J Reed on 08/24/03 at 12:34 AM very hot- i love it
-patti |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/01/03 at 11:18 AM there is no more exquisite sight than humans in the act and art of pretzeling. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/22/03 at 02:44 AM whoa, this is..oh, I drooled on myself. Ahem, well anyways. Yummy. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/19/04 at 01:32 AM wow..just wow that's lovely.. |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 12/08/04 at 08:18 PM The first line says it all. You took something that could be tawdry and cheap and kept that allure but dressed it up so we still get the same sensual feeling but without the trashy aftertaste. Very nice! |
| Posted by Christina Butcher on 06/01/05 at 04:39 AM sexy |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/22/06 at 09:28 PM Lovely and romantic- very sensual. Very good read. Excellent write! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/26/06 at 11:53 AM Whoa....shower time. What a mental image I am stuck with. |
