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broken

by Andrew S Adams

Forgetting that everything was consequential,
Interpereted as a man, selling his soul in those
XXX rated movies. he is not happy, he is a whore-
Everything may look like it's coming together,
Decieving notion, isn't it? he's just coming apart at the seams.

07/22/2003

Posted on 07/22/2003
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 07/23/03 at 12:42 AM

What Aiko said. Truly outstanding:)

Posted by Cole Miller on 07/23/03 at 04:10 AM

coming apart at the seams is one of my favorite phrases, and you use it so well.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/26/03 at 11:24 PM

Speaking as someone that seems to mis-define what is and isn't consequential all the time, this poem really speaks to me. Great read.

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