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A Flight of Fantasy by David R Spellman
It must have been learning to fly then,
the day I discovered that young sparrow
frightened and alone, helplessly chirping,
stranded on the metal stair to the upper floor
baking in the hot, mid-day summer sun.
Unable to discover the purpose of its wings
or perhaps injured in the attempt though
I could not detect any broken appendages
other than its spirit, shocked at harsh reality.
I too felt helpless in my desire to assist
and decided to give it some cool water
for thirst or comfort from the harsh sun
whichever it needed the most I could not tell
nor would ever discover its eventual fate
for when I checked later on, it was gone.
More likely they were borne on the wind or
dragged underfoot, landing haplessly on my porch
but the bits of twigs and scraps of food that
I occasionally found there the following spring
I liked to think were offerings of thanks
deposited there by that once helpless bird
who had survived to repay my one simple act.
06/06/2003 Posted on 07/21/2003 Copyright © 2025 David R Spellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/21/03 at 06:14 PM Vivid narrative poetry at its best! And an apparent happy ending also. Nice one David. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/21/03 at 08:56 PM Perhaps more a parable than a fantasy. A lesson taught (or to be learned). The scene very much down-to-earth. The "moral of the story": deeds done unselfishly in love will be repaid. Right on! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/22/03 at 11:27 PM What a great write.It is the way u tell it that has made such an otherwise insignificant part of life suddenly become so significant.Kudos. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/23/03 at 02:49 AM i really liek this poem, it has such a classic moral and very nice symbols |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 07/23/03 at 02:49 AM i really liek this poem, it has such a classic moral and very nice symbols |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/23/03 at 03:54 AM I love this... It is beautifuly tender and loving. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/24/03 at 12:37 PM To be gentle to some of God's smallest creatures is such a gift... to them, yes, but in memory to you. This is simply beautiful. |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/24/03 at 08:40 PM Beautiful poem David ... I wish all of humanity could be so giving! I wish you peace and love always! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/31/03 at 04:09 AM Nice tender poem Dave. I feed eight Finches
every day. They reward me with bird poop under the feeder and a small mountain of spent thistle
seed.....Charlie |
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