pathetic.org :: subtle pushing by Michele Schottelkorb

{ pathetic.org }

subtle pushing

if You hate me

let me go

if its over

say its so

if You cant

take one more day

then pack my bags

no more play

if You like me

well be friends

if You care

well meet the ends

if You can

still smile at me

well raise our daughter

separately

if You love me

You must act fast

dont let me leave

please make this last

for once Im gone

Im gone for good

You know this well

You know I could

(You helped me the last time

You know I would)

07/14/2003

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/18/03 at 08:34 AM

I like how each stanza progresses... from hate, to like, to love

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/14/04 at 02:44 PM

the heavens can hear this plea and they would answer what fool be one to allow such an angel to leave.

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