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don't fix me, I'm not broken

by Cymbre Dolphay

it seems we've run aground
well that's quite all right
just don't lose faith in me
even though I've gone away

my problem isn't you
it's just the things you do
that are driving me to drink
just let me have my way
let me go astray for a while

I don't love you less
when I am not around
we're just on shaky ground
and I need some time to rest

the stars will realign
all in the proper time
I'll find you when I'm better
so stop trying to fix me
I'm not broken

07/07/2003

Author's Note: ummm...someone tell me what I just wrote. I know who and what inspired it, but I have no clue wether I like it or not or what exactly to do with it...meh!

Posted on 07/08/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cymbre Dolphay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Beth K Hannah on 07/08/03 at 04:43 AM

i like it, and not only because i know the background. It's good, and something all friends need to know at times.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 07/08/03 at 10:36 PM

when you can't quite put your finger on what's wrong in a relationship, temporarily, but you know you need some alone time for things to nebulously 'resettle'. that's what is is about, i think.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/11/03 at 08:24 PM

I like it. It gives a feeling of things not being right between friends at that moment... little things getting on each others nerves but recognizing it will pass

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