Cracker Jack (senryu) by David R Spellman
caramel popcorn but
where have all the peanuts gone?
that would be a prize!
07/07/2003 Posted on 07/07/2003 Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman
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Posted by Mara Meade on 07/07/03 at 10:06 PM -chuckling- things have changed, haven't they? I always liked the peanuts better than the popcorn, but yeah, went for the prize... |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/08/03 at 12:00 AM The prize is in hope;
The answer is evaded;
The popcorn faded |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/08/03 at 03:47 AM laughing-my brother and I would share, he liked the peanuts, I the popcorn. He would let me have the girl prizes, he the boy's , but we would fight over those forbidden tatoos!(mom HATED them for some reason) Thanks for an almost forgotten memory:o) |
Posted by Lori Johnson on 07/08/03 at 05:22 PM "Ain't that the truth" as we say down here in the south. LOL
*chuckle*
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Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/09/03 at 04:00 AM Hi David,
Very good. Yummy. I love Cracker Jacks, haven't had them in along time. Not sure I still can, cause of the fat, sugar, etc. They are very good. There used to be alot of peanut, guess they cut back on them. Wouldn't know it? Jean |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/09/03 at 11:43 PM Nutty poem Dave. ~(8^D)=(.....Charlie |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/17/03 at 03:11 AM Yummy! *smiling*.... |
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