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Last Wish

by Charles E Minshall

When I leave this world
Bury me under glass,
So I can watch
All the pretty girls pass.

They always get
A rise from me,
Again a rise
I hope to see.

07/06/2003

Posted on 07/07/2003
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/07/03 at 04:39 AM

lol.... cute! Love the word play here. and the fact it can be taken lightly... or seriously.

Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/07/03 at 05:57 AM

lol naughty and witty.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/07/03 at 11:53 PM

LOL!!! You think you'll be interested even as you are laid to rest! Reminds me that they say the late Senator Strom Thurmond never lost interest in the girls!

Posted by Jane E Pearce on 07/08/03 at 01:19 AM

Oh Charles-this is so funny. Love the double wording. Heh-heh. Men never change. (thank goodness.) Jane

Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/08/03 at 03:24 AM

Oh, you!!!*shaking head and laughing*

Posted by David R Spellman on 07/08/03 at 03:49 AM

Great one Charles - here's to hoping there is some life in us afterwards!

Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/08/03 at 08:19 PM

hahahah....this is so funny! Did you know in Belgium when they renovated the parliament they gave it a glass floor....symbolizing the openness of parliament and government. After a while they had to put in a carpet where the visitors (on guided tours) had to walk over because of too much distractions on the floor below. heheheh

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/09/03 at 05:26 PM

Raising the dead has never been so humorous... I hope it raises all of you.

Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 07/09/03 at 11:03 PM

haha...Very cute Charlie! Love it!! ~Mel~

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/10/03 at 01:28 PM

I unofficially name you the Pathetic Court Jester with this one!

Posted by Mara Meade on 07/16/03 at 01:09 PM

Bawdy Laughter! This is just too funny. -chuckle-

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 07/26/03 at 11:06 PM

LOL! It gives a whole knew meaning to the word stiff! ;0)

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/31/03 at 11:44 AM

and here I thought the deceased were already stiffs.

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:28 AM

Hmm, if one pretty enough walks by I'm sure a resurrection would be possible. ;)

Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/08/04 at 03:19 AM

heh heh Amen brother. :')

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