by Kitty Ness

Punk rock
whistle stop
dry kisses
on the backs of my hands
where the bouncer
drew two huge 'X's

vintage polos
prince superior
remember him
getting upset at a Devo
song in a television commercial
for blenders

Buffalo exchange
emo falling rain
kane, citizen
out of his element at a
high school dance
with a fake moustache and
orange bow tie

Dropkick presence
halfsick senses
dead potted plants
he's just a boy
stupid in his age and disposition
but he just kills me
sometimes inadvertently


Author's Note: Pif, tattooed punk whitey wannabe tattooed black rapper. It's dumb because he is and backwards and rhyme-esque because that's how he talks.

Posted on 07/02/2003
Copyright © 2018 Kitty Ness

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/10/18 at 05:09 AM

Love the use of vocabulary and rap beat to this. Congrats on POTD Kitty. Well deserved.

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